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Knocking
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15.01.2011 23:51
Автор: Gatita
To forget you? Very easy!
Just a knock ... and i forgot!
Every day it's only teasing
Of my nerves, and pain... a lot!

Everyday it's almost drama,
And the beginner is only you,
And the phrase it's all "la famme",
You are the winner, saying true.

Every day I want be simple,
But you make me play a role,
I'm hidding all my secrets,
Just not to be your slave at all.

Do you hear? No? Why, Honey?
Is somebody knocking at the door?
No, I'm writting to you "Vale"
And will not think about you more.

10/01/09
 

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+2 # Tim 16.01.2011 10:13
Эк Вы бусурманщину-то привечаете...
 
 
+3 # Gatita 16.01.2011 16:02
Цитирую Tim:
Эк Вы бусурманщину-то привечаете...


что ж, языки - моя страсть!!! Особенно английский
 
 
+2 # Tim 16.01.2011 16:06
Каждому своё
 
 
+3 # DABNDCNHNUblH 16.01.2011 16:31
What a language?What is "every day I want be simple".Did you mean "I want to be simple every day" or 'I want every day to be simple'? And why have you written 'will not think about you' and not 'shall not'? And you should have written 'think of' and not 'think about'
 
 
# Tim 16.01.2011 16:39
Да, он такой, он умный :lol:
 
 
+2 # Gatita 16.01.2011 16:44
Цитирую DABNDCNHNUblH:
What a language?What is "every day I want be simple".Did you mean "I want to be simple every day" or 'I want every day to be simple'? And why have you written 'will not think about you' and not 'shall not'? And you should have written 'think of' and not 'think about'


ok... there is a rule in the poetry... no rules if you have rhyme. This is about 'I want be simple'. I had to use 'to' after 'want', but i didn't do that because of the rhythm. About 'will' and 'shall', actually about several years ago, the grammar of english changed, since that time you can use 'will' instead of 'shall' in future tense, which helps to define 'shall' as a modal verb. About 'think of' and 'think about', they are equivalents, you can use both of them. Did i answer you what kind of language i use?
 
 
+2 # slivshin 21.02.2017 22:32
Right, "shall" is very rare in modern English.
 

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